Slide one needs more negative space on the bottom and could use less text. If you mention "painter" you need to add back-up visuals. You could just say "Famous British Visual Artist" and make it more streamlined to suit your needs. Slide two is nicely balanced. Slide three should include "paintings" since you mentioned it. Slides four through six look nice. Are they examples of "camera-less photography? There's no need for slides seven and eight just include the last three photographs of Susan Derges on the last slide. Adding the titles is a nice touch and your balance is well done.
Slide one needs more negative space on the bottom and could use less text. If you mention "painter" you need to add back-up visuals. You could just say "Famous British Visual Artist" and make it more streamlined to suit your needs. Slide two is nicely balanced. Slide three should include "paintings" since you mentioned it. Slides four through six look nice. Are they examples of "camera-less photography? There's no need for slides seven and eight just include the last three photographs of Susan Derges on the last slide. Adding the titles is a nice touch and your balance is well done.
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